The great big, brown, black dog is pretty ugly

its teeth were so big it looked like they were swelling

its paws scratching che, che, che against marble tiles

its life threatening growl grr, grr

staying in your head

its dreadful wine eunh, eunh

haunting me forever

but now it's gone with the wind

and my fear is gone

My family metaphor

My family is a group of animals
My dad is always hungry and growling for food
My mom is always in a bad mood
My sisters always want to fight
My brother is always picking up weights with all his might
But me I'm different I play games and get on the computer
like a regular little boy.

The great big brown black dog is pretty ugly
Its teeth were so big it looked like they were swelling

The deadly green reptile

The deadly green reptile

The deadly green reptile has thick roast, rough skin
slithering through the thick, green swamp

looking for something to feed on

maybe nothing that I would want

maybe something alive or raw

but who knows, it may have eaten a dogs paw

The Bright shiny fish

The Bright Shiny Fish

The bright, shiny fish
is silky smooth
it sit’s in one spot
and never moves
it taste’s very good when it is fried
but when it was all gone
i tended to cry

Concrete Poem

SHARK

The White Icecream

The ice cream is white as light
it makes my teeth shine all night
The ice cream is icy cold
that is why it is hard to hold